神圣的战争伴奏:英语高手来给我改作文啊

英语口语报告
口语考试时对老师做的报告
Goodmorning Mr Gao, now,I will give my oral english report for my writing discussion in this term .
In this term , we have written five compositions,my parters and I discussed four of them .From Monday to Friday, every night we discussed two compositions. But before the discussion ,the writer should print it and send it to every members ,and then every member should read carefully before discussion ,all of this have been done ,then ,we bangan to discuss.
We discussed the composition through the QQ group . I think it’s it’s very convenience in this way. For one thing, every member can talk his oppion for free,and more than one people can speak at one time ,it’s very difficultice.The other thing ,we can remain the recored of the discussion ,it can safe our much time . So ,I think it’s a good way for discussion .
In this term ,I feel my writing ability was improved .
Ok ,that’s all my report .thank you very much .

征文

Call for paper
Good news !Do you want show yoursekf to the world ?Now there is a chance .The Indian Conference on computer Graphics sponsored by Premier Academic Institutions .
The theme is :”Recent advances in computer image processing .” Prepare the manuscripts in A4 paper , sheet size 8.5 11 inch pages.All manuscripts are limited to 12 single – spaced pages , including the references ,figures ,tables and so on .We will judge the paper on originality ,technical strengh ,significance ,quality of presentation ,interest and relevance to the conference attenders .We will accepte both hard copy and electronic submission .The paper may not appear in or be considered for another conference .the best papers from the conference may be considered for publication in Electronic Graphics .
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高手帮我改一下撒
不然我的英语会不及格的5555555555555