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volunteer needed
Dear fellow students:
Our school's student Union is gong to organize a volunteer activity this coming summer vacation and now recruiting volunteers.
The volunteer activity's purpose,contents and arrangements are as follows: The aim of the activity is to raise more money to help those who suffer from the cancers and can't afford the high expenses of treatment.
Volunteers need to make volunteer performances and talk people into contributing the money. We will assign volunteers to different places to raise money.And specific time and places will be published later on.
The volunteers we need must have good speaking ability and know how to communicate with the local people and passers-by. If you think you have the ability,please contact the student union as soon as possible.The telephone number is ********
The mobile phone number is ***********
student union

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