2017东城初三二模语文:请问这句话又语病吗?

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In the past, you could rarely find a schoolyard where the girls played in the middle of the yard.

这个定语从语中比较典型的语病。我认为可以改为。 In the past, you could rarely find a schoolyard inthe middle of which the girls played .
当然也可以有别的改法。



应该是In the past, you could rarely find a schoolyard which the girls played in the middle of

酱字的吧

有。