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Mt Lushan
Today my agenda is Mountain Lushan in my hometown.
Mountain Lushan ia a famous mountain in China. It sits in southern of Jiujiang City, Jiangxi Province. Mountain Lushan is on the bank of Chinsese biggest freshwater lake, Poyang Lake. And there is the Changjiang River nearby. It’s became the China’s World Heritage in 1996. It’s the World Geologic Park,too.
Mountain Lushan is well-know by its beautiful view. I think the best time you go to there is summer. It’s very cool. Winter is beautiful too, you can enjoy to the snow view. But the best time to see the cloud sea is in spring. Of course, autumn is also wonderful here.
Danyang Peak is the highest peak of Mountain Lushan, rises 1474 meters above sea level . There also has some good places to visit. For example, Guling Town, White Deer Cave, Wulao Peak, Donglin Lake and so on. There has some famous hot springs, too.

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