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Our favourite Olympic sport
I like( playing) football best.It’s popular around the world.English people are good at(it) ,but Chinese people aren’t good at (it).However,Chinese people still like (playing) football very much.Lots of children want to be a (player)in the future.Football is popular,because it’s a very exciting sport.Basketball is exciting,too,but football is more exciting than basketball.Watch a football match is a relax thing,but play football is very tiring thing.So if you want to be a good (player),you must practice every day.

Our favourite Olympic sport
I like football best.It’s popular around the world.English people are good at football,but Chinese people aren’t.However,Chinese people still like football very much.Lots of children want to be footballers in the future.Football is popular,because it’s very exciting.Basketball is exciting,too,but football is more exciting than basketball.Watching football matches is relaxing,but playing football is very tiring.So if you want to be a good footballer,you must practice playing it every day.

1.all around the world
2.english people--british
3.chinese people--chinese
4.footballer-football player
5.Watch a football match is a relax thing--to watch a football match is something can make you relax
6.but play football is very tiring thing--but to play this game will make you feel tired

呵呵,做一小点建议.
1English people are good at football while Chinese people aren’t .
2Football is popularbecause it’s very exciting.(because不加逗号，因为是介词）
3Basketball is exciting,too.But football is more exciting.(罗嗦了）
4Watching a football match is a relax thing,but playing is a very tiring thing.

sport---+s
footballer---football player
Watch---Watching
play---playing
is very---is a very