神马品牌网众泰z700的机械钥匙孔:请改错－绝对加分
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Every one has an indelible childhood, so am I.When I was young, I was a lovely and lively girl. The most intersting thing for me was eating. Once I wanted to eat sugar at night, but my mother was afraid that it will damage my teeth, so she hide all the sugars. Subsequently I look for the sugar by clambering the cabinet, and knocked down from the chair. From then on, I never look for sugar to eat
Every one HAD an indelible childhood, so DID I. When I was young, I was a lovely and lively girl. The most intersting thing for me was eating. Once I wanted to eat CANDY at night. My mother was afraid that it WOULD damage my teeth, so she HID all CANDIES. Subsequently I LOOKED for CANDY by STANDING ON A CHAIR TO REACH THE CABINET, and FELL down from the chair. From then on, I HAVE never LOOKED for CANDY to eat.
第一行“so am i”应为“so do i”
第三行“it will damage”应为“it would damage”。
第三行“she hide all the sugars”应为“she hid all the sugars”，“sugars”应为“sugar”
第四行 “look for the ”应为“looked for the”
最后一行“look for sugar”应为“looked for”
拜托……把行分开好不？