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South the Jingsu source is suitable your cedar system clothes limited company to be situated under the scenery beautiful fruit and flowers foot of a hill,The company has staff 300. Company area nearly 100 Chinese acres,The floor space amounts to more than 30,000 square meters,In factory as beautiful as a painting:Waterfall,Rill,Meandering,SmallBridge,Pond,Weeping willow,Bamboo grove,Sinuous place......Is a spring with flowers,fall with fruit,a Yam summer,winter green garden-type factory. The company beginning constructed in 1994, had each kind of advanced clothing special purpose equipment, mainly was engaged in the western-style clothing,shirt,jacket,clothing and so on windproof coat development,production and sale. The company over the years many times participates in the province international clothing festival, the clothing big game, has obtained the magnificent achievement, wins the province international clothing festival big prize many times, "province quality product" and so on title of honor.
The corporate growth always "starts take the name brand from the smallest bits of property, succeeds from 123 starts" as a criterion. Along with the enterprise order form unceasing increase, the original production scale, the productivity has not been able to satisfy the huge market demand by far, in 2005 the corporate investment 60 million Yuan expansions productions scale causes the western-style clothing for this, the shirt, the work clothes, the leisure to install and so on the product annual output surpasses 800,000 wraps
on march 16,2006
下面那位高手帮帮忙吧！！！！我的分数不多啊！都给你!中文是这样的！题目：（南京苏源宜尔杉制衣有限公司 ／江苏宜儿杉制衣有限公司）
内容：江苏宜尔杉制衣有限公司坐落在风景秀丽的花果山脚下,公司拥有员工三百余名。公司占地面积近一百亩,建筑面积达三万多平方米,厂内风景如画:瀑布,小溪,亭台,小桥,池塘,垂柳,竹林,曲径通幽处......是一个春有花,秋有果,夏有荫,冬有绿的花园式工厂。公司始建于一九九四年，拥有各类先进的服装专用设备，主要从事西装,衬衫,夹克,风衣等服装的开发,生产和销售。公司历年来多次参加省国际性服装节，服装大赛，取得了辉煌的业绩，多次获得省国际服装节大奖，“省优质产品”等光荣称号。
公司发展一直以“名牌从一针一线做起，成功从一二三开始”为准则。随着企业订单的不断增加，原有的生产规模，生产能力已远远不能满足庞大的市场需求，为此二千零五年公司投资六千万元扩大生产规模使西装，衬衫，工装，休闲装等产品年产量超过八十万件套（附上时间3．16，2006）
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再给点分，就可以考虑，其实你这篇文章写的已经可以了，但是还有毛病。
In the south of the Jingsu ,The source is suitable ,your cedar system of the clothes limited company .
South of Jingsu source is suitable your cedar system of clothes limited company to be situated under the scenery beautiful fruit and flowers foot of a hill,The company has staff 300. The company's area is nearly 100 acres of China,The floor space amount too more than 30,000 square meters,The factory as beautiful as a painting:Waterfall,Rill,Meandering,SmallBridge,Pond,Weeping willow,Bamboo grove,Sinuous place......Is the spring of flowers,fall with fruit,a Yam summer,winter green garden-type factory. The company beginning constructed in 1994, had each kind of advanced clothing special purpose equipment, mainly was engaged in the western-style clothing,shirt,jacket,clothing and so on windproof coat development,production and sale. The company over the years many times participates in the province international clothing festival, the big game of clothing has obtained the magnificent achievement, wins the province international clothing festival with the big prize in many times, "province quality product" and so on titles of honor.
The corporate growth always "starts take the name brand from the smallest bits of property, succeed from 123 starts" as a criterion. Along with the enterprise order form unceasing increase, the original production scales, the productivity has not been able to satisfy the huge market demand by farther, in 2005 the corporate investment as 60 millions Yuan expansions production scale causes the western-style clothing for these, the shirt, the worker's clothes, the leisure to install and so on the production annual output surpasses 800,000 wraps
on march 16th,2006