神马品牌网炒双孢菇的做法:英语考级 1级 重赏！
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有可能会有一些词打错 在这里先道歉
HELLOW TEACHERS MY NAME IS YANG FAN,I`M 14YEARS OLD BUT I`M TALL THAN OTHER GIRLS IN MY CLASS.TODAY I`M VERY GLAD TO SEE YOU HERE AND STAND HERE.I`M A HUMOR MIDDLE SCHOOL STUDENT .I LIKE MANY THINGS,SUCH AS LEARN ENGLISH,TALK TO OTHERS IN ENGLISH,AND INTRUDUCE MYSELF IN ENGLISH AND SO ON.BECAUSE ENGLISH IS AN INTERENATIONAL LANGUAGE .AT PRESENT,THERE ARE MANY PEOPLE CAN SPEAK ENGLISH WELL,IN A WORD ,ENGLISH IS VERY IMPORTANT.I LIKE TO EAT CANDY BECAUSE IT CAN MAKE YOU DOWN INTO ITS SWEETNESS.MY FAVORITE COLOR IS BLUE,BECAUSE IT CAN GIVE YOU A FEELING OF FRESHMENT. I`M A COMMONPLACE(平凡的) STUDENT,LIKE OTHER GIRS AND BOYS.IF YOU WANT TO HELP ,I WILL DO MY BEST GIVE HELP TO YOU. NOW I CAN STAND HERE I THINK I`M MORE CONFIDENCE (自信)THAN OTHERS.O.K AT LAST THANKS FOR LISTENING TO ME CAREFULLY.THAT`S ALL.THANK YOU.
300以上 但是不要太多 要求是3分钟
如果100 不够 再追也可以考虑 但是要先见稿
QQ 420078647
不是我 是我同学 拜托了 跪求
HELLOW TEACHERS MY NAME IS YANG FAN,A 14YEARS OLD Schoolgirl who id the tallest IN MY CLASS.TODAY I`M VERY GLAD TO SEE YOU HERE .I`M quite humorous ,and I LIKE MANY THINGS,SUCH AS LEARNing ENGLISH,reading english novels,and singing english songs,etc.(发音et cetra).AS ENGLISH IS AN INTERENATIONAL LANGUAGE ,THERE ARE MANY PEOPLE Speaking english very fluently(流利的),from whom i will learn more about english.
I LIKE TO EAT CANDY BECAUSE IT CAN MAKE YOU DOWN INTO ITS SWEETNESS.MY FAVORITE COLOR IS BLUE,BECAUSE IT CAN GIVE YOU A FEELING OF FRESHMENT. I`M A COMMONPLACE(平凡的) STUDENT,LIKE OTHER GIRS AND BOYS.IF YOU WANT TO HELP ,I WILL DO MY BEST GIVE HELP TO YOU. NOW I CAN STAND HERE I THINK I`M MORE CONFIDENCE (自信)THAN ever before.O.K AT LAST THANKS FOR LISTENING TO ME CAREFULLY.THAT`S ALL.THANK YOU.
我稍微该改动一下,保证OK
有些话罗嗦啦~~~像LEARN ENGLISH,TALK TO OTHERS IN ENGLISH,AND INTRUDUCE MYSELF IN ENGLISH就可以改成LEARNING, TALKING TO OTHERS AND INTRUDUCEING MYSELF IN ENGLISH.必须加ING,一个句子不能同时用两个动词原形!还有就是不要说” I THINK I`M MORE CONFIDENCE THAN OTHERS”
你还可以加一些你喜欢的食物呀运动呀偶像呀对新学期的期望呀以及座右铭之类的,对新学期的期望.对同学说” I’ll be glad to make friends with you!”
最好再写点有深度的,我这只是基本参考~!^_^
老兄啊，你的英语实在是不行啊。还是自己踏踏实实的好好补一下吧，不要搞这种投机取巧的方法了。对你实际上没有好处啊！
Buster,your english are not so good ,i suggest you learning it from the basis.
Maybe you can join some outclass english study !
Come on!
HELLOW TEACHERS MY NAME IS YANG FAN,I`M 14YEARS OLD BUT I`M TALL THAN OTHER GIRLS IN MY CLASS.TODAY I`M VERY GLAD TO SEE YOU HERE AND STAND HERE.I`M A HUMOR MIDDLE SCHOOL STUDENT .I LIKE MANY THINGS,SUCH AS LEARN ENGLISH,TALK TO OTHERS IN ENGLISH,AND INTRUDUCE MYSELF IN ENGLISH AND SO ON.BECAUSE ENGLISH IS AN INTERENATIONAL LANGUAGE .AT PRESENT,THERE ARE MANY PEOPLE CAN SPEAK ENGLISH WELL,IN A WORD ,ENGLISH IS VERY IMPORTANT.I LIKE TO EAT CANDY BECAUSE IT CAN MAKE YOU DOWN INTO ITS SWEETNESS.MY FAVORITE COLOR IS BLUE,BECAUSE IT CAN GIVE YOU A FEELING OF FRESHMENT. I`M A COMMONPLACE(平凡的) STUDENT,LIKE OTHER GIRS AND BOYS.IF YOU WANT TO HELP ,I WILL DO MY BEST GIVE HELP TO YOU. NOW I CAN STAND HERE I THINK I`M MORE CONFIDENCE (自信)THAN OTHERS.O.K AT LAST THANKS FOR LISTENING TO ME CAREFULLY.THAT`S ALL.THANK YOU.
要加到多少字？