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首先,请楼主看这些词:
summer:
vi.
避暑, 过夏天
steep
[sti:p]
adj.
陡峭的, 险峻的,

draw together团结起来
submontane
adj.
在山麓的, 山下的

全文:
We went to Mount. Lu to summer the other day.We climbed the mountain which has many steops that are rather steep.We children were powerful in strength and left the adults behind.We competed that who climbed first to the top would be the winner.We climbed and climbed ....Everyone wanted to reach the top to see the view first.At last we were all tired,but we drew together and finally we got to the top together and had a look at the view submontane and took some photos.

A few days ago, we went to Mount Lushan to spend summer. One day, we went hiking,there are many ladder on the mountain. That special steep ladder, particularly high. We, the children particularly good physical and climb rapidly, and people have moved back to big. We competitions, see a Peak will win, we climb over you. They first look at down the mountain scenery to the Peak. Later we all tired, they unite together up top of the hill, saw down the mountain scenery, but also took many photos.

We went to the mountain Lushan for summer the other day. We went climbing on the first day. There are a lot of steps on the way up, tey are just too steep, too many. Children like us have good stamina, we climbed very fast and the grow-ups were left behind. We decided to race, the first who reach the top wins. We climbed and climbed, all wished to reach the top and enjoy the submontane scenery from there. Later, we felt tired, so we united and climbed to the top together. We enjoyed the submontane scenery and took photos.

A few days ago,we spent a holiday at the Lu Shan summer resort.The first day,we climbed the mountain.There were so many ladders that were very precipitous on the mountain.Each of the children like me had a good bodily strength,so we climbed quickly.We had a competition that was who could be the NO.1 of the competition.All of the children wanted to be the first that can saw the scenery under the mountain.At last,we felt tired.We cope with each other,climbed to the top of the mountain together,saw the beautiful scenery and took some photos.

有的地方翻译的可能不太准确,不知道这样行不行.

A few days ago,we went to LuShan for holiday.The first day,we went climbing,there are many stairs on the way to the top.Those stairs are very cliff,also very long.But our children had great energy,we climbed fast and left the adults away behind us.We had a race to classify who can reach the top first,then who is the winner.We climbed and climbed,everybody wanted to get to the top first to enjoy the view.However, meanwhile,we were all tired.So we stood together and climbed to the top.Then we saw the view in the foot of the mountain and took some photos.

A few days ago, we went the mountain of lu to go to the summer resort.The first day, we climbed a mountain, a lot of stairs of top of hills .That stairs special danger , much more special.Our se kid's physical strengths were special good, and climbed very quickly, All jilted the behind the adults.We compete, seeing who arrive the summit of hill first, who won, we climbed ang climbed , all thongt to be the first arrive to the summit of hill that seen below the hills of scenery.Afterwards we were all tired, solidify consistently, climbed to climb mountain the crest together, scenery come in sight of below the hills, still clapped to shine on.