神马品牌网格雷尔同人文:自己写的应用文,请大家帮忙改正
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下面是自己写的一篇应用文求职信,请大家帮忙改正其中的错误之处
Dear Sir,
I am writting to you this letter to demonstrate my keen interest in the position of assistent managemer which you advertised in China Daily. As is indicated in the enclosed resume and references, my composite capability closely parallels your requirement.
I am conviced that the school subjects in my specialized area business management, combined with the course in statistics which I taught myself in my spare time, will lend me an edge in the fierce competition. Furthermore, taking an active part in campus activities has strongly enhanced my teamwork spirit and improved my interpersonal skills.
You can contact me at 2659699 for further imformation and I am looking forward to meet you at your earliest convience. Thank you for your favorable considerations.
Yours Faithfully,
Jenny Green
一楼的和我看的应该是同一本作文书吧!我的这个文章仅仅是把原文改的字数合格了而已,原来的有两百多字呢!发上来就是想让大家看下有没有什么地方改的不对的,谢谢了哈!
Dear Sir,
I am writting to you this letter to demonstrate my keen interest in the position of assistent managemer which you advertised in China Daily. As is indicated in the enclosed resume and references, my composite capability closely parallels your requirement.
I am conviced that the school subjects in my specialized area business management, combined with the course in statistics which I taught myself in my spare time, will lend me an edge in the fierce competition. Furthermore, taking an active part in campus activities has strongly enhanced my teamwork spirit and improved my interpersonal skills.
You can contact me at 2659699 for further imformation and I am looking forward to meet you at your earliest convience. Thank you for your favorable considerations.
Yours Faithfully,
Jenny Green
一楼的和我看的应该是同一本作文书吧!我的这个文章仅仅是把原文改的字数合格了而已,原来的有两百多字呢!发上来就是想让大家看下有没有什么地方改的不对的,谢谢了哈!
非常标准,不过你要知道求职信是最简单,下次写点比较难的体裁.
那我加个长句吧
Another point i want to draw your attention to is that i have been taking an active part in a variety of campus activies.in the due process my teamwork spirit has been enhanced and my interpersonal skills improved.
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