神马品牌网菊花什么季节开花:请英语语法强者进
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我是一名英语初学者,在暑假写了几篇短文,请英语好的朋友帮忙看一下,是否有错误,谢谢
A lovely bird
Yesterday,my father found a bird at the bus station and took it to our home.
This bird is very lovely.It has black feather and a yellow bill.But anyone didn’t know what kind of bird is it.
In the evening,my father brought a big box,and put the bird into it.
To our surprise,today’s morning at about half past five,we heard some strange noise.My parents and me all were frighten.We got up quickly and went to the balcony to look for the place which is the noise came from.After a whale,we heard another voice.It said”HELLO,HELLO”
“Oh,it was the bird cry”my father said.
Then we took it to the animal store.The shopkeeper told us that it was a myna.
“Oh,really?”I was very exciting.Beacause this kind of birds are very clever.They can say some easy words and phrases.
I gave it a name that is “little black”I think I will be its friend later on.
谢谢
A lovely bird
Yesterday,my father found a bird at the bus station and took it to our home.
This bird is very lovely.It has black feather and a yellow bill.But anyone didn’t know what kind of bird is it.
In the evening,my father brought a big box,and put the bird into it.
To our surprise,today’s morning at about half past five,we heard some strange noise.My parents and me all were frighten.We got up quickly and went to the balcony to look for the place which is the noise came from.After a whale,we heard another voice.It said”HELLO,HELLO”
“Oh,it was the bird cry”my father said.
Then we took it to the animal store.The shopkeeper told us that it was a myna.
“Oh,really?”I was very exciting.Beacause this kind of birds are very clever.They can say some easy words and phrases.
I gave it a name that is “little black”I think I will be its friend later on.
谢谢
But anyone didn’t know what kind of bird is it.
错错错错
But noone knew what kind of bird it is
-ed adj.错了两次 My parents and me all were frighten I was very exciting
today’s morning at about half past five
改成at about half past five this morning
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你是初学者应该买一些参考书看看。
But anyone didn’t know what kind of bird is it.
应改称 but no one knows the kind of this bird
today’s morning应改成this morning
My parents and me all were 应改成were all
look for the place which is the noise came from应改成look for the place where the noise came from
Oh,it was the bird cry,改成it's the bird speaking
I was very exciting改成I was very excited
I gave it a name that is “little black”I think I will be its friend later on. 外国人通常把小动物视作与我们是平等的，因此称呼小动物是一般不用it,二是视其雌雄称为she or he 。结尾的on应去掉