真三国4怎么玩不了:帮忙看看这段文字的错误.,谢谢,.

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He is famous,he can play music,sing and dance very good,he can tell interesting stories.He doesn't smoke and drink,he stays at home in the evening and stops talk when I'm tired of listening.

He is famous.He can play music,sing and dance very well(修饰动词要用副词,而不是形容词),he can tell interesting stories.He doesn't smoke or(否定句里AND应该改成OR) drink.he stays at home in the evening and stops talking(STOP DOING固定搭配,停止做某事) when I'm tired of listening.

good->well
smoke and drink-.smoke or drink(否定句)
stops talk ->stops talking

good-->well
stops talking

very good ->very well

talk->talking

不能使用逗号连接两个完整的句子，需要使用分号或者句号。
还有stops talking

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