汉中金江大酒店叫按摩:英语高手请指点,急!

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我要参加英语比赛,第一项是1分钟自荐,第二项是2分钟演讲
下面是我的自荐稿:Self Introduction
Ladies and gentlemen,
I am very happy to get such a chance to take part in such an exciting contest.
My name is Zhang Liang, a graduate of Nanjing No.6 Mid-school. I used to be the chairman of our students' union, the monitor of my class and the 团支书 of our league.
I was awarded 江苏省大中学生社会活动积极分子,江苏省德育标兵and I was assessed as Three good student of Jiangsu Province twice.
I like music, painting and sports and I enjoy doing some outings. Well, I am here to get some experience and to gain some confidence, not for the prize. I hope all of you can like me.
1.请帮助翻译文中的中文。
2.请帮忙修改
3.请问演讲有什么需要注意的问题
谢谢
注意一下:我问的是翻译一下文中的中文单词不是翻译全文为英文哦!谢谢

女士们先生们:
我非常高兴能有这样的一次机会来做这样一次激动人心的比赛。我叫张亮,是南京第六中学的毕业生。我过去曾经是我们学校学生会的主席、我们班的班长以及团队的团支书。
我被授予江苏省大中学生社会活动积极分子,江苏省德育标兵等称号,而且被两次评为江苏省的三好学生。
我喜欢音乐,画画和体育运动。而且我喜欢外出。我今天来参加比赛并不是为了得奖,而是为了获得一些经验来增强自己的自信心。我希望大家都会喜欢我。

注意演讲时的表情,而且语速尽量慢点,毕竟要让大家能停得清楚。

女士们、先生们:
很高兴有机会参加如此令人兴奋的比赛.我的名字是Zhang Liang,毕业于南京市第六中学. 我曾经担任学生会主席、班长和团志书;被授予江苏省学生社会活动积极分子,江苏省德育标兵,而且两次被评为省三好学生.我喜欢音乐、绘画、体育和一些户外活动. 我参加这次比赛的目的是获取经验和增强信心,而不是获奖.希望大家喜欢我.

团志书:league branch secretary
大中学生tertiary and secondary school student
社会活动积极分子social activist
德育标兵moral pacesetters(not sure)

posture and eye contact are important in speech contest

修改如下
Ladies and gentlemen,
My name is Zhang Liang, I am very happy to have a chance to take part in such an exciting contest. please allow me to introduce myself .
i'm a graduate from Nanjing No.6 Mid-school. I used to be the chairman of our students' union, the monitor of my class and the league branch secretary of our league.
I was awarded 江苏省大中学生社会活动积极分子,江苏省德育标兵and assessed as Three good student of Jiangsu Province twice.
I love music, painting , sports and I also enjoy doing some outings. I am here to get some experience and to show my confidence, I hope all of you can enjoying my performance