nt玛利安:请帮我修改一下对话

A.for long times - for a long time

A.Oh ,you looked tired, what's wrong with you?-Oh, you look tired, what's the matter?

B. I'll have a try-I'll give it a try.

B. No, I have never done it, I thought playing table tennis was more interesting. - No, I have never tried it. I think table tennis is more interesting.

B. Maybe I know him - Maybe I do.

B: That's OK,thank you.-That's great, thank you.

B: Em..I always play computers on weekend.. - Umm, I always play on my computer during weekends.

A: Oh,Don't play computers this weekend- Oh, don't play on your computer this weekend.

B: OK! that sounds good!- OK, that sounds like a good idea.

WHAT'S WRONG WITH YOU-英语里是"你有什么毛病"的意思,就是有点"骂人"的感觉了.你这里应该用"WHAT'S THE MATTER?""怎么了"

THAT'S OK-一般在一个人问题后,回答"THAT'S OK"是说"不用了,谢谢",而你这里的意思正好相反了.

其他都是小毛病.

A: Hi,B I haven't seen you for long times
B: It's you,A. Nice to meet you
A: Nice to meet you,too.Oh ,you looked tired, what's wrong with you?
B: Em,maybe I have been on computer too much time recently, and my eyes are dry and red
A: I see. I think you should spend less time on the computer,and do more exercises outside
B: That's a good idea, I'll try. What kind of exercises do you like?
A: I like playing baseball. Have you ever played baseball?
B: No, I haven't , I think playing table tennis was more interesting.
A: Oh,I see. My friend Tom plays table tennis very well. Do you know him?
B: Maybe I know him ,is he the one who drives the red sports car?
A: Yes, that's right.
B: But I don't know him very well.
A: It doesn't matter. I'll introduce him to you next time.
B: OK,thank you.
A: Do you have time this weekend?
B: Em..I always play computers on weekend..
A: Oh,Don't play computers this weekend, Let's go to see Tom and play table tennis!
B: OK! that sounds good!See you this weekend
A: See you !

A: Hi,B It is a long time i have not seen you!
B: It's you,A. Nice to see you
A: Nice to see you,too.Oh ,you look tired, what's wrong with you?
B: Em,maybe I spent on computer a lot recently, and my eyes are dry and red
A: I see. I think you should spend less time on the computer,and do much more outdoor exercise .
B: That's a good idea, I'll have a try. What kind of exercise do you like?
A: I like playing baseball. Do you play baseball?
B: No, I have ever played it, I thought playing table tennis was more interesting.
A: Oh,I see. My friend Tom plays table tennis very well. Do you know him?
B: Maybe I know him ,is he the one who drives the red sports car?
A: Yes, that's right.
B: But I don't know him very well.
A: It doesn't matter. I'll introduce him to you next time.
B: That's OK,thank you.
A: Do you have time this weekend?
B: Em..I always play computers on weekend..
A: Oh,Don't play computers this weekend, Let's go to see Tom and play table tennis!
B: OK! that sounds good!See you this weekend
A: See you !

你写的对话已经很好了, 本人只是加点个人的意见

A: Hi,B long time no see.
B: Oh,It's you,A. Nice to meet you
A: Nice to meet you,too.Oh ,you looked tired, what's up?
B: Em,maybe I'm working on computer for a long time, and my eyes are dry and red .
A: oh,I see. I think you should spend too much time on the computer,why not do some exercise outside ?
B: That's a good idea, I'll try it. What kind of exercise do you like?
A: I like playing baseball. Have you ever played baseball?
B: No, never, I think table tennis are more interesting than that.
A: Reall? Do you know Tom? he plays table tennis very well.
B: Maybe, is the one who always drives a red sport car?
A: Yes, exactlly.
B: But I don't know him very much.
A: It doesn't matter. I'll introduce him to you next time.
B: Fantasty ,thank you.
A: Do you have time this weekend?
B: Em..I always play computers on the weekend..
A: Oh,come on.Don't play computers this weekend, Let's go to see Tom and play table tennis!
B: OK! that sounds good!See you this weekend
A: See you !