湖南娄底冷水江市:自己写的英语文章，帮忙改一下错啊

What's more is that there are two in one day, 不要用my god,是口语

The teacher doesn't tell us the important parts...
不要用 hazard, 用 pain

We will have 8 exams this semester (注意拼法）

The finished one is PE...改成: PE is finished

All the classes....,SO I am afraid of the exams.

ON June 17th 不是 and

Someone said "you passed, why are you taking it again?"

I just want to RECEIVE a HIGHER mark. No matter what they SAY, I will try my best and WORK HARD

第一段和第二段是两个不同的人写的吧
呵呵
水平有点不一样哦
个人意见
别介意

Next week I will have to take three exams and two of these ones in will be taken place in the same day, my god. what\'s more the teachers doesn\'t tell us the highlight, so I have to read the whole books. It is hazard. We will have 8 exams this term and the olny finished one is PE.
All the classes we take this term are so difficult that I am fear of all these exams. And on June 17th I will take CET6. Though someone said to me\"you have passed, why do you take it again?\" I just want a high mark and no matter what they says, I will try my best and hold on.