古代将军的家书:你很幸运,没有看见我发怒的样子怎么翻译啊

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●楼主:你好,标准的翻译是:

What you are very lucky did not see the appearance I got angry.

Being very lucky,you did not see the appearance I got angry.

Not having seen the appearance I got angry,you are very lucky.

●翻译提示:
1.采用的结构是主语从句做主语的结构,What you are very lucky 你幸运的是...... 这样将汉语的意思整合表达,地道精准的。

2.Being very lucky,采用分词做伴随,表明情况,而将you放到后面,汉语中你幸运的不需要表达you的含义了,这是地道的语法思维

3.Not having seen the appearance I got angry,这句和上句类似,将you放到你幸运的,而将汉语部分中没看到我生气的样子做伴随表达,

4.采用复合结构的翻译,注意主句,和从句,可以采用主语从句的表达也可以采用分词做伴随的表达,都是正确的。

●翻译建议:
简洁明快,语法清晰,层次变化丰富,但要精练!多切磋!

Thank god, you didn't see what I looked like when I got mad.
You are lucky not to see my mad face.

You are very lucky, did not see the a angry

You're lucky that you haven't meet my anger.
"meet"不确定

You are very lucky, has not seen the appearance which I gets angry

You are very lucky, has not seen the appearance which I gets angry