神马品牌网tcp ip属性灰色:帮帮我修改这篇英语作文。
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Would you mind not droping the litter from the window ?It will make neiborhoods feel uncomfortable.And could you please not play the radio too loud and please don't make your steps too loud. Then could you please not play soccer on the floor ?It will be dangerous for you to play soccer at home.It also make some noise .But I should study in a quiet room.
In a word ,would you mind not doing something that make people annoy ?I hope you don't mind my word .
Would you mind not droping the litter from the window ?It will make neiborhoods feel uncomfortable.And could you please not play the radio too loud and please don't make your steps too loud. Then could you please not play soccer on the floor ?It will be dangerous for you to play soccer at home.It also make some noise .But I should study in a quiet room.
In a word ,would you mind not doing something that make people annoy ?I hope you don't mind my word .
litter-本身就有乱丢垃圾的意思.
很多词用的不恰当.我按照你的意思帮你改了一下.
Do you mind not litter from your windows? It makes the whole neighborhood look bad. And please do not turn your radio so loud, please keep your steps quieter when you walk. In addition, pleaes do not play soccer ball at home on the floor because it is dangerous, plus it's noisy. I would suggest you to play outside.
In a word, I am a little annoyed by all the noises you make in our living space. I really want to study in a quiet room.
I hope you don't mind me saying what's in my mind.
Thank you.
GOOD LUCK TO YOU!!
droping 为dropping neiborhoods为neighborhood