神马品牌网全站仪测量精度:大家帮我检查一下这篇英语
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hello everyone. It's my turn today. I think all the classmates that are ahead of me have done a good job. Some talked about their hobbies, some mentioned their friends and some even sang. So, I don't know what to talk about. I'd like to do something else. I am going to discribe my English teacher:
Our English teacher is not tall. She has got long hair and she always wears a pair of glasses. Her class is vivid and most of the students like to attend her class and she always arranges small activities in her classes. In a word, she is a very good teacher!"
Our English teacher is not tall. She has got long hair and she always wears a pair of glasses. Her class is vivid and most of the students like to attend her class and she always arranges small activities in her classes. In a word, she is a very good teacher!"
I think all the classmates that have done theirs in front of mine have done a good job.
In other words, she is a very good teacher.
就这两句需要修改， 其他都正确
哈罗每个人. 今天轮到我. 我想我所有做一种好的工作所有的是在～之前的同学. 一些谈论他们的嗜好,一些提到了他们的朋友，而且一些甚至唱. 因此,我不 知道该谈论什么. 我想要做别的东西. 我正在去 discribe 我的英文老师:
我们的英文老师不是高. 她已经有长的头发，而且她总是戴一副眼镜. 她的班级是生动的，而且大部份学生喜欢叁加她的班级，而且她总是在她的班级中安排小的活动. 总而言之，她是一位真正的好老师!"
discribe用的不好
I think all the classmates ahead of me have done a good job.
She is a good teacher I will never forget
我觉得应该使用一些连词，使文章连贯，ok?