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I know many parters’ ages is less than mine !
I know many mates are younger than I

So I must study hard to study English
So I must study English hard

it is a very good school I think in my hurt
It is a very good school in my heart

My favorite is playing badminton it could become thinner than me , now

I am fond of playing badminton because it could make me thinner

It’s too big It is so big

Hello everybody，my name is Eva ! This name is very interesting,because it is makes people thinks about a princess with yellow curly hair! I am 14 years old , I know that many parters’ are younger than me, so I must study hard! l am in junior high school,my school is attached to Xi’an Jiao Tong Univercity. It is a very good school, I think in my hurt！(我不懂,) Oh! My favorite sport is badminton,because I could become thinner, maybe it could be a interesting reason for( )! My family are very happy, I love both of my parents, because they made my feel warm in my famliy!

I am living in an apartment with my parents ,our house is pretty big,and I enjoy myself there! I have mang(是不是many) brothers,and they like me very much !
This is my shorter introduction! I hope that you will give me a good score for my introduction.
At last,although my english level is not very good,but l willl try my best, because l don't want chinese can't enter the world bucause of our language.

楼上的兄弟翻译的也太那个什么了吧?
Hello everybody My name is Eva ! I am Eva.更口语化
This name is very interesting Because it is a name of good

girl! This name is lovely for girls.我想问名字有趣和这是对女孩来说很好的名字有因果关系吗?呵呵

Hehe Next , I am 14 years old , I know many parters’ ages is

less than mine !

And, i am 14 years old, as i know, most mates participant in the game are younger than me.

So I must study hard to study English! So,i must do my best to study english.

My school is The middle School attached

to Xi’an Jiao Tong Univercity! i am from .....school.

it is a very good school I think in my hurt！！ i do believe that it is one of the best school in China because of its .....自己吹

Oh! My favorite is playing badminton it could become thinner than me , now Oh maybe it could be a interesting reason! my favorite 后面家个game或者sport,我不知道你为什么那么喜欢用interesting这个词,用在这里不合适,如果不会用别的词就用good

My family are very happy I love mother rand father Because they send me love !! I have a lovely family because my parents send love to me and everyone around us.

I am living an apartment with my parents ！！ It’s too big！！ I enjoy myself! I have mang brothers They like me very much !!
This is my short introduction! I hope that pretty ladies and handsome gentlemens

give me a good grade !! 最后这句真晕啊,哪有这么拍马屁的

我只能给你改这么多,是按照你的意思,你的这个介绍真的太幼稚了，说真的.你应该上网搜索一下.不要按照中国的用词来写

I think u mean heart right? my family are very happy (I live in a happy family)or you mean your relatives, if so it's ok .this is my shorter introduction ,not shorter, (short)not bucause,because.

显然你现在水平还不够 需要多看课外书

you use Ch-English!