神马品牌网西安掌灵科技公司资料:帮忙找出语法错误吧，谢谢了
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Good Morning !
I know you are very busy , I am sorry for botherring you again .
I only want to know what is your opinions about our items , any of your suggestion will be welcome in our company .
If these items can not satisfied you , please do not hesitate to tell me .
Thanks for taking you time to read my Email .
Have a nice day & good luck
I know you are very busy , I am sorry for botherring you again .
I only want to know what is your opinions about our items , any of your suggestion will be welcome in our company .
If these items can not satisfied you , please do not hesitate to tell me .
Thanks for taking you time to read my Email .
Have a nice day & good luck
1.I am sorry to bother you again.
2.I only want to know waht your opinions about our items are.
3.Your suggestions will be welcomed in our company.
4. satisfied----satisfy
5. Thank you for reading my email.
错误太多了.
botherring拼写错误，应该为bothering
satisfied改为satisfy
Thanks for taking you time to read my Email改为Thank you for reading my mail或者直接说Thank you即可
"what is your opinions"应改为what is your opinion;
应是suggestions
botherring拼写错误，bothering
去掉what is
be welcome 加ed
satisfied改为satisfy
把Thanks for taking you time中的you改成your
1.botherring 应改为bothering
2.what is 应改为 what are
3.suggestion 应改为 sugestions
4.in our company 应改为 by our company
5.satisfied 应改为 satisfy
6.you time 应改为 your time
7. 在 I am sorry 之前加上but能使你的文章语气显得更有礼貌。