每个人的社会角色:帮忙修改下英文信.

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Dear Lusa:
Long time no see,thank you for your letter of September 8,telling me you are getting along well with your
studies and enjoying your life in Beijing.I think Beijing is a spectacular city.Have you ever visited the place and seen the shooting of a picture.It must be very interesting.
Now,I'm near to graduate,after I graduate,I will continue my study,maybe for I am near to graduate,I've always thought the knowledge,I've learned was too little and from now on,I must study hard and try to catch up with you in study.
Last month,my friend sent me rabbit for my birthday present,until now,it's only two months old.When he came to my home,apparently,he hadn't left his mother long.Although a different species,his carefree innocence was evident.But he also raised his long,small crimson ears,wrinkled his nose and showed a very apprehensive look in his eyes.Probably,after all,he felt this place and the people here strange,and was less at ease here than in his old home.This rabbit was kept most of the time in my terrace,this was because he was too fond of tearing the wallpaper and chewing the legs of furniture.Now it is him accompany with me when I am alone.That would be better if he can speak.
It is the time to talk about you now.I believe that you are the best student in your class.As you've never failure in the study.but you also should pay more attention to your health rather than your study.After all,the health can't buy with money,in the last letter you said you will study abroad with your classmate.you are so happiness.I am really admire you.because study abroad has many adyantages.In the first palce,you can learn much advanced knowledge of science and technology from the foreign country,and therefore widen your vision and broaden your minds.Secondly,while studying in a foreign country,you can travel widely,visiting famous scenicspots and making friends with the local people.Thirdly,you use the foreign language in your daily life so that you ability in the second language may be improved quickly.For all these advantages,it is really worthwhile to go abroad for future studies.And I hope I can go abroad after I've finished my study.
So much for today now.I am looking forward to hearing from you soon,and keep in touch with each other.
With best wishes,
懂英文的就帮忙修改下.不懂的就表在这里乱发言.谢谢.

请等一下,需要一点时间

Your letter is awful.

more than 100 words, violate my rules, sorry