水利项目验收管理办法:懂英文的`快来帮我翻译啊!!!

小妹/小弟，
本来想给你翻译一下咯，可是……写一封给英美人的信完全不是这样写的！如果给你像一楼那样逐字逐句翻译下来，怕是你的Avril会不知所云～
先好好学英语吧，学好后再写这样一封信是件很简单的事情，暂且把这当作你学好英语的动力吧。对了，需要英语家教吗？我是海大的，如果你在海口，可以联系我～我的qq：315935428，验证时说明你的身份以免意外。
我做了不少改动，不过改动是必要滴～

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（以上空格处填写你的地址）
March 16, 2006

Nettwerk Management
1650 W. 2nd Avenue
Vancouver, B.C., V6J 4R3 Canada
（上面是加拿大的那个地址，或者替换成美国的地址，也是按照这个格式写）

Dear Avril,
I’m one of your loyal fans from Hainan Province of China. I’ve been mad keen on you and your voice since I occasionally heard your songs for the first time. I wonder if you please send me some of your photos with signature as the most precious present for my birthday. By 2nd, June I will have been 14 years old. (这里用了你的生日，你可以改成实际日期，不改也不碍事的) And I will never be happier if you let my wishes come true that day.
I love your songs in the albums---《Let go》and 《Under My Skin》, because they all reveal your true feelings and real sentiments. Besides, your style is unique but not affected. That’s why I adore you and your music. I’m sure I’ll support you for ever. In addition, I hope more wonderful albums will come out soon.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes.
Yours sincerely
Zuyou, Li

Dear Avril:

Hello
I am from Hainan Province of China, and I am your FANS . I like you very much! It is said that you would write back to your song fans if you hear from them. immdiately , I write to you and hope you can get it!
I can remeber that when i firstly listen to your songsrfrom a game,it is so beautiful ,.. oh, I have loved you ! so excited,i doon't know wether i shoud post the letter and we separated by so far.. It is said that someone writes to you and just receives the letter in reply when more than one year, oh ...Then I have already forgotten the letter writing to you once .. I want your signature , five pieces jusr are ok.. Goodlooking oh! !
OK.. Write to you so much. Have an opportunity to write to you again!

这个不错！

Dear Avril:

Hello
I am from Hainan Province of China, and I am your FANS . I like you very much! It is said that you would write back to your song fans if you hear from them. immdiately , I write to you and hope you can get it!
I can remeber that when i firstly listen to your songsrfrom a game,it is so beautiful ,.. oh, I have loved you ! so excited,i doon't know wether i shoud post the letter and we separated by so far.. It is said that someone writes to you and just receives the letter in reply when more than one year, oh ...Then I have already forgotten the letter writing to you once .. I want your signature , five pieces jusr are ok.. Goodlooking oh! !
OK.. Write to you so much. Have an opportunity to write to you again!
回答者：fanen01 - 魔法师 四级 3-15 13:21

Dear Avril,
Hi!I am from Hainan province of China, and Iam one of your fans.I love you very much!I heard that your song fans write to you and you will reply. So I wrote this letter to you immediately and I hope you'll recieve it!
The first time I listen to your songs was in a game.It was very nice.I fell in love with you from then on...hehe!It's exciting to write to you
and there is a long distance between us,I'm not sure if it can be sent to you!I heard someone got your reply more than a year later since they wrote to you, then they'll forget they had wrote to you.
Well,I just want to get some pictures of you with signature.Five is fine.Of course attractive ones!
Well,I just want to stop here.Looking forward to get the opportunity to write to you.

Yours,
Xio yo
Mar.15th,2006

楼上明显是机译的
Wants to be attractive oh
这句很明显

Dear Avril:

Hello! I am come from Hainan Ministries China.I am your FANS .oh!I like you very much!Heard the singer fan writes a letter for you ,you can reply in writing..I wrote a letter to you soon.Hoped you may receive! !
First time listens to your song is hears at a game,Very pleasant to hear..Fell in love with your ~ ha ha ~to write a letter for you is quite excited..Moreover we are separated by that far..Did not know can mail! !I heard some people write a letter for you at more than year of times only then receives the reply,Ha-ha...When the time comes all already had forgotten once pulling which has written a letter to you,Graciousness..I wanted your signature according to. 5 to be possible..Wants to be attractive oh! !
Good pulls..Wrote such manyHad the opportunity to write again for you!