急诊科医生谁当主任了:寻找英文高手

朋友：
Hey guys,
你好！
Nice to meet you!
我来自中国，很高兴认识你，我的名字叫沈振泉。
I come from china, a country with profound culture, and it is a pleasure to get to know you. My name is ShenZhenquan.And how about yours?
第一次给你写Email,也不知道说些什么，希望能和你成为朋友！
It's the first time for me to write you an e-mail, and I am confused about what to say. However, I sincerely hope that I can be a friend with you.

sincerely,
Shen Zhenquan

注释：Hey guys,更符合美国人说话习惯
a country with profound culture一个充满文化底蕴的国度

Dear friend,
Hello! I come from China and I'm very glad to meet you. My name is Shen Zhenquan.
I don't know what to say for the first E-mail to you. I hope we can be friend!

Yours
XXX

Dear Friend:
Hello!
I come from China,my name is Shen Zhenquan.Nice to write to you!
This is my first time to write a E-mail to you,so I don't know what to say,but I hope to make friend with you!

Yours
Shen Zhenquan

Dear my friend:
Hello!
My name is Shen Zhenquan,and I come from China main land.I am glad to know you.Actually it is the first E-mail that I send to you.So I have no idea what to say.I hope that we can be friends!
Best wishes,
Yours,sincerely,
Zhenquan

Dear friend:

Hello!

I'm from China, I am glad to know you, my name is Shenzhenquan.

It's the first time I write Email to you, I don't know what to say,and I wish to become friends With you!

Dear;

Hiya!

I'm coming from China.Of course I'm a Chinese.It's nice to know you,my name's ZhenQuan Shen.It's the first time I send E-mail to you so I don't know what should I say~but I hope that we can be friends!