食肉动物有哪些:帮我往这篇英语作文里再田几句。

Last summer holiday, （I caught the no.1 in my class, as a encouragement, my family had a tour with me to Hainan .You know, I was dreaming for that day before, and then my dream would be come true! Incredible! ）But when we came to HaiNan, I fould the weather was terrific hot, more than I coule bear! The sky was blue, more than I could describe,（ without any white coulds and wrinkles）. And the sea was blue and bright ,more than I could believe,（mirror the blue sky, and you can inspire the fresh sea wind.） Walking by the sea is just like being in the oil painting! We sailed to an island called Xidao. I swam there. Swimming in the sea is quite different from that in a pool. Because the depth is various all the time. Maybe the water can't afford you this minute, and then it will flow over your head! Besides the swimming, we also had a good meal there. We had a nice seafood dish. I forgot the name of that conch, but I bought back the shell. If you want to have a look, you may ask me. Or, we may go to Hainan together, for I am always hoping to come to that place again. I really like that place, a place of blue and brightness,though it is a little bit hot...
the paradise you will never forget and always dreaming for...)

Last summer holiday, I went to Hainan with my family. The weather was terrific! The sky was blue more than I could describe [dis’kraib], the sea was blue and bright more than I could believe;(the air is fresh more than i could imagine). Walking by the sea is just like being in the oil painting! We sailed to an island called Xidao. I swam there. Swimming in the sea is quite different from that in a pool. Because the depth is various all the time. Maybe the water can't afford you this minute, and then it will flow over your head,(and if you swim in the sea maybe you will have the chance to taste the bitterness and salty water in the sea)! Besides the swimming, we also had a good meal there. We had a nice seafood dish. I forgot the name of that conch, but I bought back the shell. If you want to have a look, you may ask me. Or, we may go to Hainan together, for I am always hoping to come to that place again. I really like that place, a place of blue and brightness,(a place full of imagination and memory).

错误太多，你不想让我助纣为虐吧。