神马品牌网美少女成长计划安卓:请各位朋友帮我看一下这段英文是否通顺
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I graduated from XX University in 2004. I major in XX. When in school I got a good score during my 4 year-study and passed CET-6 in grade 2.
After graduation I came to Shenzhen to find an IT job. First I tried to find a position as a programmer, but since I have no experience in any actual work of programming, no company engaged me.
After several days I entered a small company who makes hospital software. My job is testing, documentation writing, and demonstration tutorials making of all the software products produced by the company. I learn some basic knowledge of IT industry from the work but it asked for little about technology. I still really want to be a programmer and learn more about programming.
So I left that company after one year and then went to take a training course about java programming under the conduct of XX. The course lasts 3 months and I have learned many knowledge about java.
Now I have graduated from the training class and try to be a programmer again. I love programming and IT industry so much. In the future years I will try my best to be a good programmer and an IT worker. I will always be absorbed in java programming in 3 to 5 years and try to make further progress in my IT career from now on.
I graduated from XX University in 2004. I major in XX. When in school I got a good score during my 4 year-study and passed CET-6 in grade 2.
After graduation I came to Shenzhen to find an IT job. First I tried to find a position as a programmer, but since I have no experience in any actual work of programming, no company engaged me.
After several days I entered a small company who makes hospital software. My job is testing, documentation writing, and demonstration tutorials making of all the software products produced by the company. I learn some basic knowledge of IT industry from the work but it asked for little about technology. I still really want to be a programmer and learn more about programming.
So I left that company after one year and then went to take a training course about java programming under the conduct of XX. The course lasts 3 months and I have learned many knowledge about java.
Now I have graduated from the training class and try to be a programmer again. I love programming and IT industry so much. In the future years I will try my best to be a good programmer and an IT worker. I will always be absorbed in java programming in 3 to 5 years and try to make further progress in my IT career from now on.