神马品牌网车间卫生清洁管理制度:修改作文
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Dear Ms Steward:
We have a part.It's on the night before the Spring Festival.Please come and join us.The part is start at 6:00.I wait for you at the gate for the school.The part is less than three hours.The wealther is very cold at nighe.Wear more clothes is very important.
Happy Spring Festival.I think you will be happy.
Betty
请帮我修改一下这封信
We have a part.It's on the night before the Spring Festival.Please come and join us.The part is start at 6:00.I wait for you at the gate for the school.The part is less than three hours.The wealther is very cold at nighe.Wear more clothes is very important.
Happy Spring Festival.I think you will be happy.
Betty
请帮我修改一下这封信
we will have a party.
it will be in the night before the spring festival.
please come and join us.
the party(不是part) begins at 6:00
i will wait for you at the school gate.
the party is no more than 3 hours.
the weather(不是wealther - -) is very cold at night(not nighe).
it's very important to take on more clothes.(wear表示状态，不可以用在文中，句子中不能出现2个动词）
happy spring festival.
i'm sure you'll be happy.
betty
你的信错误有点头，已经都改过来了。另外，整体要用将来时态 我写的文中1处现在时，可以表将来。而其他不行
We will have a party.The party will start at 6:00. I will wait for you at the gate of the school.Wearing more clothes is very important.I wish you will be happy.