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翻译是很简单，但也需要注意些细节：如形容词的先后顺序；最贴切的形容词；到底是直译还是意译以及部分语序问题——建议楼主多比较参考！呵呵，仅供参考。
I have a beautiful elder sister.She is tall and thin with a black head of hair and big bright eyes.How pretty she is!My elder sister is twenty years old this year.She is a sophomore.Do you know why she is so beautiful?Becasue she runs every morning and likes singing and dancing.

我有一个姐姐，她很漂亮。长得又高又瘦，披着一头乌黑的长发和一双明亮的大眼睛，美丽极了。
My beautiful elder sister is a tall, slim lady with long black hair and a pair of gorgeous sparkling large eyes.
她今年20岁，已经是大学二年级了。
This years she is only 20 years of age but was already a university year 2 student .
你知道她为什么 这么漂亮吗？因为她每天早晨起来跑步的原因。她还喜欢唱歌跳舞。
Do you know how can she be so beautiful? It is because she gets up early in the morning everyday and goes jogging. Plus she also likes singing and dancing too!

我有一个姐姐，她很漂亮。长得又高又瘦，披着一头乌黑的长发和一双明亮的大眼睛，美丽极了。她今年20岁，已经是大学二年级了。你知道她为什么 这么漂亮吗？因为她每天早晨起来跑步的原因。她还喜欢唱歌跳舞。

I have a sister. Very nice she looks who is tall and slim as well. Moreover, the pitch dark shoulder down hair and a pair of bright big eyes also belongs to her. Nothing is matched with her beauty. Do you know why she is such a surprisng creature? The reason lies in that she does some running every morning.Besides,she likes singing and dancing much more than anything else.

hahahaha. for the sake of 100 pts:

I have an elder sister, she is slim, tall and very pretty. Long dark hair and beautiful eyes. Really pretty. She is 20 years old and a sophomore in collage. Want know why she is so pretty? Because she got up early every day for exercise and she loves to dance and sing.

I have an elder sister, who is pretty.
She is tall and slim, with lovely black hair and a pair of bright ayes. She is twenty-year old and a sophomore. Do you know why she is so beautiful? Because she runs every morning , and she likes singing and dancing as well.

I have one elder sister, she is very attractive. Also is long high also is thin, throws over one pitch-black Changfa and one pair of bright big eye, was beautiful extremely. Her this year 20 years old, already was the university second grade. You know she such is why attractive? Because she every day morning gets up the reason which jogs. She also likes singing dances.