神马品牌网幼儿自画像简笔画大全:自我介绍---小学四年级 大家给个意见
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Oh!today is new year!I very very like new year!!!!New year is very cold But We're in house It's hot.
I like august andseptember It's very hot but I dont like december It's very cold.
严重的语法错误具体在哪啊?
I'm a girl. I'm very blue. I have thirty pens and books. I like my books and toys on my bed very much, especially the rag babies such as the dog and the mouse.
Oh, it is the new year's day today. I like it so much. It's cold but we are in warm house.
I like August and September because it's very hot. But I don't like December because it's very cold.
问两个问题：1、你想用blue表达什么啊？如果说自己心情不好应该用depressed.
2、是笔和书加起来30吗？如果不是。应该说30 pens and some books
very good
语法错误严重,不过有个更严重的,blue中文确实是沮丧的,蓝色的.但是blue也有色情的意思,考虑是不是换个词
自我介绍的话最好写一写你的外表,样貌,喜欢什么等等,如果不够字数的话可以写你与别人发生的一件事也行,不要写得太复杂,这样很容易有语法上的错误.
I have thirty pen and book 中间的pen和book要加s复数
I'm very like my book and bed toy dog toy mouse on the bed.改为
I'm like my book and bed toy dog toy mouse on the bed very much.较好
It's hot.改为It's warm较好