动漫怎么制作的:大学生是否应该结婚 写作范文

和我去年的题目一样？
是要英语的吗？
I don't agree with the opinion of students at college getting married. First of all, when college students falling love with each other, they are in a physical and psychological changing period, the couple are easy to be dizzy due to the temporary sweet love. While if get married at that time, it will hamper their further development, after the love impulse if they can not fit for each other after marriage, which may lead to the increasing of divorce rate. Secondly, college students should pay much attention to their learning, loving spends much energy of both, if get married, the family daily routings will affect their learning, and ten years learning hardship will be spoiled. Thirdly, because college students have no income, most of them depend on their parents to finish their learning. Once married, it will add economic burden to both family. Therefore, i don't agree with the opinion of students at college getting married.

CORRECT FROM 小油饼：
I don't agree with the IDEA of COLLEGE students getting married WHILE THEY ARE STILL AT SCHOOL. First of all, college students MAY NOT HAVE COMPLETELY DEVELOPED MATURELY physicalLY and psychologicalLY。 COUPLES USUALLY FALL IN LOVE IMPULSIVELY WITHOUT KNOWING EACH OTHER WELL ENOUGH. SINCE THEY ARE NOT YET FULLY MATURED AND NOT YET WELL PREPARED FOR MARRIAGE，THEY WILL EASILY END UP IN DIVORCE AFTER THEY FOUND OUT THAT THEY DON’T FIT INTO EACH OTHER LATER ON。

Secondly, college students should SPEND MORE ENERGY IN PURSUING THEIR STUDIES。 TOO EARLY AN MARRIAGE MIGHT SIDETRACK THEIR DAILY ROUTINE AND RESULT IN SPOILING THEIR TEN YEARS OF HARDSHIP IN IN LEARNING.

Thirdly, USUALLY college students HAVE NOT HAVE EARNING ABILITY YET。MOST OF THEM ARE STILL DEPENDING ON THEIR parents. Once GOT married, it MIGHT add AN economic burden to both familIES. Therefore, i don't agree with the IDEA of students getting married WHILE THEY ARE STILL IN COLLEGE。