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There are five people in my house: grandma,grandpa,father,mother and me.My mother is a teacher,father is a doctor.They are both busy working. Usually, only my grandma, grandpa and I at home.They all love me very much. I am very fond of this home.

My household consists of five people. They are my grandmother, my grandfather, my father, my mother, and I. My mother is a school teacher. My father is a doctor. Both of my parents are busy with theirwork. Ordinarily I stay home with my grandmother and my grandfather. They love me very much. I love this home!

there are five people in my family, my grandfather, grandmather, father, mother and me. my mother is a teacher and my father, a doctor. they are both busy with their jobs. usually,i stay at home with grandpa and grandma and they like me very much. i love my family.

There are five people in my family.They are my grandparent、my parent and me.My mother is a teacher,my father is a doctor.They usually busy working.I and my grandparent at home as usual.

There are five people in my family, they are my grandma,grandpa,father,mother and me. My motheris a teacher,my father is a doctor,they are hustling and bustling everyday.Often,only me, grandma and grandpa at home.they love so much.I love my family.
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