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The Present My Father Gave Me
When I was young,my father ,who always taught me how to be a true man,told me that it is essential to be tolerant in your life whatever happens.And that remains the most valuable present he gave me,I think
To be tolerant, I need to keep calm when great trouble lies in front of me,however difficult it is to overcome it; To be tolerant ,I need to resist the temptation of all kinds of the outside world,even if it is so attractive; To be torlerant, I need to pull myself(控制自己情绪) in times of extreme sorrows and joys, no matter how they affect me.
And this is ,in my opinion, the most precious present my father have given me.I have long tried to act like what he said and I am making progress little by little.As Father said , this tolerance will be the basic element I need to be successful.
I'm proud of my father.I'm proud of being offered the golden advice the life.
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