神马品牌网2014款路虎运动:这是我同学写的一首歌,帮忙看看哪里错了!
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A grey night(送给我喜欢女孩。。）
Now,we are together
Sitting outside in the sunshine
But soon we be apart
And soon it be night at noon
Now ,things are fine
The clouds are far away ,up in the sky
But soon I be on a plane
And soon,you feel the cold rain
You promised to stay in touch when we part
You promised before I left that you alway love me
Time goes by and people cry
And everything goes too fast
Now,we are together
Sitting outside in the sunshine
But soon we be apart
And soon it be night at noon
Now ,things are fine
The clouds are far away ,up in the sky
But soon I be on a plane
And soon,you feel the cold rain
You promised to stay in touch when we part
You promised before I left that you alway love me
Time goes by and people cry
And everything goes too fast
A grey night(送给我喜欢女孩。。）
Now,we are together
Sitting outside in the sunshine
But soon we be apart
And soon it be night at noon
Now ,things are fine
The clouds are far away ,up in the sky
But soon I be on a plane
And soon,you feel the cold rain
You promised to keeep in touch when we are part
You promised before I left that you would alway love me
Time goes by and people cry
And everything goes too fast
为什么用英文？
And soon it be night at noon不是很好．意境不好，其它还不错．