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Depression
Depression is now becoming a common emotional problem to most of people as our economy has made great progress and the pressure of life becomes greater especially for the people in the big city . There are a point of view which regards depression is related to money and education degree of people . However , in my opinion , depression is not a problem towards economy or education . Every people has the possibility of depression which is not restricted in poorer or less educated people .
Every people would experience depression . People who think depression was more prevalent among poorer or less educated people would excessively highlight the importance of money . In their opinion , money is the boot of depression — rich people would happy ,however poor people would not be happy at all . Although money is very important , it is not all of our life . We have many other things which are very important to our life too , for example , friendship , love , family life and so on . The feeling of happy is derived from all aspect of our life . Many times I would think that more depressive people are rich or high educated people for who are in a more cruel environment . The average age of people who work in the zhongguancun is 53 which is ten years less than common people . Pressure is bigger for them .
What measures should we take to beat depression ? I think the most important problem is the attitude of life . Things that are regarded as important things by most of people may not be things you want to get . In a word , make life for yourself .

Depression
Depression is now becoming a common emotional problem to most of people. Along with developing of our economy, great progress and the pressure of life becomes greater especially for the people in the big city . There is a point of view which regards that depression is related to money and education degree of people . However, in my opinion , depression is not a problem towards economy or education . Every people has the possibility of depression which is not restricted to poorer or less educated people .
Every people may experience depression . People who think depression is more prevalent among poorer or less educated people would excessively highlight the importance of money . In their opinion , money is the boot of depression — rich people would happy ,however poor people would not be happy at all . Although money is very important , it is not all of our life . We have many other things which are very important to our life too . for example , friendship , love , family life and so on . The feeling of happy is derived from all aspect of our life . Many times I would think that more depressive people are rich or high educated people who are in a more cruel environment . The average age of people who work in the zhongguancun is 53 which is ten years less than common people . Pressure is heavier for them .
What measures should we take to beat depression ? I think the most important problem is the attitude of life . Things that are regarded as important things by most of people may not be things you want to get . In a word , make life for yourself .

Depression
Depression is now becoming a common emotional problem to the most of people as our economy has made great progress and the pressure of life became better. Especially the people who live in the large city . There is a point of view which regards depression is related to money and education degrees of people . However , in my opinion , depression is not a problem towards economy or education . Every people has the possibility of depression which is not restricted in poverty or uneducated people .
Every people would experience depression . People who think depression was more prevalent among poorer or less educated people would excessively highlight the importance of money . In their opinion , money is the boot of depression — rich people would happy ,however poor people would not be happy at all . Although money is very important , it is not all of our life . We have many other things which are very important to our life too , for example , friendship , love , family life and so on . The feeling of happy is derived from all aspect of our life . Many times I would think that more depressive people are rich or high educated people for who are in a more cruel environment . The average age of people who work in the zhongguancun is 53 which is ten years less than common people . Pressure is bigger for them .
What measures should we take to beat depression ? I think the most important problem is the attitude of life . Things that are regarded as important things by most of the people may not be things you want to get . In a word , make life for yourself .