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作文要求:只给了三副图画.
题目:easier chairs
第一幅:图外写 昨天 图中是 两男两女笔直的坐在那种高背椅上谈话
第二幅:图外写 今天 图中是 两男两女舒服的坐靠在沙发上谈话
第三幅:图外写 明天 图中是 两男两女舒服的躺在沙发床上谈话

下面是我的作文,请帮我改正!
Easier chairs
From the first picture, we can see that four people seat straightly in the chairs and have a negative chat with the serious expression in their faces once upon a time. Then , the second picture shows that two men and two women sit down the comfortable sofa and talk to each other .at the last picture ,the future people can lie in the sofa bed , and people will fell more comfortable and have a imaginative conversation.
Through analyzing the three pictures we can draw a conclusion that people become interested in having a good and comfortable life style. There are several reasons for this phenomena. First, with the development of economy, people may have much money and much time to improve their life and make themselves comfortable. Second, there are so many advanced technologies that we can make great effort to develop our chairs and adapt to our a sitting posture. The last but the most is that evolution of the chairs meet a human requirement.
As to me, I like the future way of talking in the sofa bed. When I sit straightly down the chair, my whole body muscle is so tight that I will fell tired very quickly. So I am tired of the first talkative style. Although I will talk together in a friendly, leisurely way on the sofa, I still do not like this pattern. Only may I lie in the sofa bed, I will be satisfied with chat in this way.
全文：Easier chairs
From the first picture, we can see that four people seat straightly in the chairs and have a negative chat with the serious expression in their faces once upon a time. Then , the second picture shows that two men and two women sit down the comfortable sofa and talk to each other .at the last picture ,the future people can lie in the sofa bed , and people will fell more comfortable and have a imaginative conversation.
Through analyzing the three pictures we can draw a conclusion that people become interested in having a good and comfortable life style. There are several reasons for this phenomena. First, with the development of economy, people may have much money and much time to improve their life and make themselves comfortable. Second, there are so many advanced technologies that we can make great effort to develop our chairs and adapt to our a sitting posture. The last but the most is that evolution of the chairs meet a human requirement.