黑龙江省地方煤炭:这是我的另外一篇英文日记也请各位过过目,把错误的地方指出,好吗?谢谢了

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This morning, we got up early. After breakfast, we went to the Headquarters of the Govemment of the Macau SAR. Then we went to the Macau Museum. At about ten, we visited the most famous place in Macau: Runis of St. Pauls. How beautiful is it!It had a long history. It was a church many years ago. We took photos there. Then we bought many famous food in the shops near the Runis of St. Pauls. It was the end of the trip. At about two o'clock, wen went back home by bus.
It was a interesting trip. I won't foget it forever. I like Macau very much. It's not very big, but it is very clean and quiet.It has a small population. All people in Macau are very nice. They always help the tourists and show them the way.Macau is an ancient city. I hope I'll come again soon.
如果这篇文章有什么不好的地方,请提出来,好让我修改,也给我打打分,谢谢。

How beautiful is it!
应该是 How beautiful it is!~~~

It was the end of the trip.
应该是 It was at the end of the trip.

I won't foget it forever.
应该是 I will never forget about it.

It's not very big
应该是 It's not so big

Macau is an ancient city.
应该是 Macau is a historic city.

I hope I'll come again soon.
应该是 I hope I'll visit it by and by.

1.第3行 应该是How beautiful it is!而你的主谓顺序错了
2.第4行~`第一句。It has a long history.博物馆还是存在的,用一般现在时就可以了。
3.第7行~`第一句。It is an interesting trip."interesting"前面的冠词用“an”请注意。

4.其余的语法错误是没有了~`但若是要为文章打分的话,恕我直言,分数不会太高。并不是因为你的语法错误,而是很多表达给人的感觉都很别扭。比如说,最后一句话好了~为什么要用“soon”呢~?感觉是chinese english了~`