神马品牌网景德镇昌飞邮寄地址:短文改错
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In the past,I do not give gifts to my friends on their birthdays.I thought it unnecessarily.
I thought that if I gave a friend a gift on birthday,he would also give it to me on mine;
actually we didn't give each other's gifts.And
I also thought it was a waste of time and money. Now I do not think this.I think we need to do that.At home, we under our parent's care,but outside we have to depend on our friend.We need to make a lot of friends.I believe the best way to make our friends is to give gifts.
大概有九处错误。清帮忙。
I thought that if I gave a friend a gift on birthday,he would also give it to me on mine;
actually we didn't give each other's gifts.And
I also thought it was a waste of time and money. Now I do not think this.I think we need to do that.At home, we under our parent's care,but outside we have to depend on our friend.We need to make a lot of friends.I believe the best way to make our friends is to give gifts.
大概有九处错误。清帮忙。
系统不让我帮啊，我回答了，可是在验证
do not give 改为did
unnecessarily改为unnecessary
on后面加his
give it to me 改为give one to me
each other's 改为each other
under前面加are
最后一个our删去
还有两处
I do not think this改为think so
depend on our friend要复数