net use del:下面是我的英语介绍，希望大家帮我修改一下，润润色，再帮我把中文的句子译成英文。谢谢

Hello everyone.(since this is an self introduction, you'd better first provide some information about yourself)
~This is my best friend HJH.~This my best friend HX.(you can't have two best "friend". you can say "this is ..., and this is .... they are two of my best friends")
~Three years ago,we met in the same class （in this class).Today we still get togetheer. ( are together)
~HJH is very friendly.She often helps me.If (when)I get into trouble
she often gives me a hand.When I feel sad.(,)I often chat with her.She often makes me happy.
~HX is very helpful.She often helps me to (不要to) learn English.She is the best listener 听我诉说快乐与悲伤. (of my happiness and sorrow).
~We all like pop music.Lee Hom is HS`s favourite singer (HS is a fervent fan of Lee Hom).RAIN is HJH`s favourite star.If we are free ,we will go shopping or go skiting
~与你再一起让我感到很充实 (to be with you alone makes me content)
~I must 珍惜(cherish) our friendship.
~I think we will have more friends in class nine.
写得不错，加油！

listen to me and share my happiness or sorrow.
I fell substantial when I with you .
珍惜 cherish
中间一段介绍往事是不是应该用过去时

1 This my best friend HX改为That is my best friend HX
2 still get togetheer改为be still together （状态）
3 She often helps me to learn English改为She often helps me learn English（help+sb+do）
4 She is the best listener 听我诉说快乐与悲伤：She is the best listener to listen to my happiness and sorrow
5 If we are free ,we will go shopping or go skiting改为 If we are free ,we ofen go shopping or skiting
6 与你再一起让我感到很充实：I feel sureness when together with you
7 I must 珍惜our friendship：I will treasure our friendship

Hello everyone. My name is...
~This is my best friend HJH and HX.
~Three years ago,we met in the same class.Today we still get togetheer.
~HJH is very friendly to me and She often helps me, If I get into trouble she will give me a hand.When I feel sad,I often chat with her.She often makes me happy and makes me forget the troubes.
~HX is very helpful.She often helps me to learn English.She is the best listener,who listen all the happiness and sadness of mine.
~We all like pop music.Lee Hom is HS`s favourite singer,while,RAIN is HJH`s favourite star.If we are free ,we will go shopping or go skiting togther.
~once more,I could meet you,my best friends,really makes me feel happy.
~I must cherish the priceless friendship between us.
~I think we will have more friends in class nine