武磊 索尔斯克亚:英文好的女士先生们 帮忙改一下

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Mister Seeger
I never forget the experience that I met you at November 2004 in Beijing. Especially your splendid report for us at the Chinese Arts Academe. After the meeting, I think the report is very important for our study and ethnomusicology, so I noted that the report and the discussion, and published it on the Journal of Tianjin Conservatory Music, which is an important transaction of the music college. Now, I send it for you, please receive it.
I am studying the Ph.d. degree now. My major is the ethnomusicology. I am an associate professor in the music department of HuaiBei teacher’s college in Anhui province. My mentor is mister Xue-Yibing. Zhang-Zhentao is my teacher, too.
I very admire you for long time, and I long for learning more with you.
These are photos of you and me :(照片暂略)
Please give me your Email address, I will send them for you. My Email address: mfy1964@163.com
My English is not good enough, if the letter has some errors, please excuse me.

Bless you!
Meng

有语病的帮着改一下 谢了
注意:不要随随便便改得乱七八糟的!!!!!

就是太长了点
我、看得眼睛都疼了
没能帮上什么忙

Mister Seeger
I never forget the day I met you at November, 2004 in Beijing, especially the splendid report of Chinese Academe of Arts you gave us. After the meeting, I thought the report was very important for our study and ethnomusicology, so I noted that the report and the discussion, and published it on the Journal of Tianjin Conservatory Music, which is an important transaction of the music college. Now, I send it to you.
I am studying the Ph.d. degree now. My major is the ethnomusicology. I am an associate professor in the music department of HuaiBei teacher’s college in Anhui province. My mentor is mister Xue-Yibing. Zhang-Zhentao is my teacher, too.
I very admire you for long time, and I long for learning more with you.
These are photos of you and me :(照片暂略)
Please give me your Email address, I will send them for you. My Email address: mfy1964@163.com
My English is not good enough, if the letter has some errors, please forgive me.

Yours,
Meng

坦白来说,你的文章糟糕得没办法修改,建议你用中文写好意思上网找人翻译吧!