神马品牌网魔兽世界血精灵老大:我写了一个作文(英语)请修改~
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Last Summer a day ,I went to the swimming ground.there were fewer people in the swimming pool than usual.I was very happy and jumped into the water.After a short while,I saw a beggar who walked along the swimming pool.I was sympethetic.So I walked to him and wanted to give him some money.But I didn't have any money.When I was jumping into the water again,I heard the beggar said:"A bad boy!"I was very emballassed.
One day in last summer
a beggar (who was) walking along
最后一个词错了embarrassed
其他的还可以 挺好的
last summer a day 的用法不多，
定语从句在这里用不太好，会引起有很多乞丐的歧义，应该是i saw a beggar walking along...
最后一个单词是embarrased.