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people know some aniaml can be trained to carry messages for them。in 1870,who the Germany got to paris,acity wascut off from other cities,peopie there tired many diffferent ways of send news ,one way was to use pigeons。the enemy shot them,but they fleweven fast。in four months about 156,000letters were sent by them,now pigeons are still used。this is because that some times only the little pigeons can carry messages there it is difffcult for man to dothat is because they are called postmen with feathers

people know some aniaml (animals) can be trained to carry messages for them。in 1870,who (when) the Germany (German) got to paris (Paris),a (the) city was cut off from other cities,peopie there tired (tried) many diffferent ways of (to) send news ,(and) one way was to use pigeons。the enemy shot (at) them,but they flew even fast (faster)。in four months about 156,000letters were sent by them,now pigeons are still used。this is because that some times (sometimes) only the little pigeons can carry messages there (which/that) it is difffcult for man to do.that is because (why) they are called postmen with feathers

people know that some animals can be trained to carry messages for them。in 1870,when the German got to Paris,a city was cut off from other cities,people there tried many different ways of sending news ,one way was to use pigeons。the enemy shot them,but they flew even fast。in four months about 156,000 letters were sent by them,now pigeons are still used。This is because that some times only the little pigeons can carry messages there it is difficult for man to do that is because they are called postmen with feathers

people know some aniaml(改成animals) can be trained to carry messages for them。in 1870,who(改成when) the Germany got to paris,a city was cut off from other cities,peopie there tired(改成tried) many diffferent ways of send(改成sending) news ,one way was to use pigeons。the (The)enemy shot them,but they flew even fast(faster)。in(In) four months about 156,000 letters were sent by them,now pigeons are still used。
this is because that(去掉that) some times only the little pigeons can carry messages
there(改成where) it is difffcult for man to do that is because(改成why) they are called postmen with feathers

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people know some animal (aniamls) can be trained to carry messages for them。in 1870,who(when) the Germany(Germans) got to paris,a(the) city was cut off from other cities,peopie there tired many diffferent ways of send(sending) news ,one way was to use pigeons. the enemy shot (加at)them,but they flew even fast(faster)。in four months, about 156,000letters were sent by them,now pigeons are still used。this is because (去掉that) some times(sometimes) only (去掉the) little pigeons can carry messages there(where) it is difffcult for man to do. that is because(why) they are called postmen with feathers

people(大写People) know some animal (aniamls) can be trained to carry messages for them。(改成.)in(改成In) 1870,who(when) the Germany(Germans) got to paris(改称Paris),a(the) city was cut off from other cities,peopie(改称people) there tired many diffferent ways of send (改成sending) news ,one way was to use pigeons. the (改成The)enemy shot (加at)them,but they flew even fast(faster)。(改成.)in(改成In) four months, about 156,000 letters were sent by them,now pigeons are still used。(改称,)this is because (去掉 this is ) some times(sometimes) only (去掉the) little pigeons can carry messages there(where) it is difffcult for man to do. that(改称大写) is because(改称why) they are called postmen with feathers (加。)